Devon I appreciate the whole concept of doing it right, and doing it to last. I am an over-builder, when I am not sitting on my butt. Butt, historically, you have set yourself up as the butt of our jokes. Since that is now your brand identity, we can’t help but continue that theme on other threads.
The comment about moisture getting between the membrane and the plywood had been rattling around in my brain. That should not happen if the membrane (whatever it is) is fully adhered to the plywood.
As for arguing the longevity of plywood, may I remind folks that the sub roof on most homes is plywood. My home is so old that its 1x8s and 1x 10s.
I think you have a solid design, and I understand that you don’t want to mess it up at the finish. But as long as water cannot get to the wood, it should be fine. Indecently, do you have a gasket between the wood and the concrete base?